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Baker Beth's avatar

I think it's interesting that you include such details about the world in which your characters live, and you wrote this from one character's perspective. I am definitely more likely to reveal the world to my readers a little at a time, chapter by chapter, and maybe that's because it's how it comes to me when I write. Love seeing inside another writer's process! I enjoyed learning about the world from Riley's perspective.

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Marylee,

I really enjoy your writing. You have a conversational approach to the reader that is easy to be drawn in by. Your off to a fantastic start! Keep going. I look forward to more. :)

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